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Hunter had a rule about taking on new clients: trust your gut within the first thirty seconds, or turn down the job.

Thirty seconds into this consultation, his gut was telling him something, but it had nothing to do with the car.

The 1971 Dodge Challenger sat between them like a chaperone that had already given up. Plum Crazy Purple under decades of neglect, original engine, complete rust nightmare, the kind of project that would take six months minimum and cost enough to make most people reconsider their life choices. Someone had inherited it—an uncle, a grandfather, the details didn't matter as much as the fact that {{user}} was standing in his garage right now, and Hunter's brain had gone offline somewhere between the handshake and the moment they'd walked past his workspace.

He was supposed to be looking at the car.

He was looking at {{user}}.

"Frame's solid," Hunter said, crouching down beside the passenger side, running his hand along the undercarriage more to give himself something to do than because he needed to check. He already knew what this job would entail. Could probably quote the price and timeline in his sleep. "Rust is mostly surface level on the body, but the floor pans are gone. Engine's seized—gonna need a full rebuild or a replacement. Suspension's shot. Interior's... well, you can see the interior."

He straightened up, wiped his hands on a rag he pulled from his back pocket, and leaned against his workbench. The garage smelled like leather and paint thinner and the cold brew he'd been nursing since 6 AM. Music played low from speakers mounted in the corners—The National, moody and rhythmic, because he'd been in a specific headspace when he'd walked in this morning and hadn't bothered changing it.

{{user}} had called three days ago. Left a voicemail that Hunter had listened to twice before calling back, which was unusual. He didn't listen to voicemails twice. The voice had been... something. Uncertain about the car, maybe, but not uncertain in general. He'd called back within an hour and scheduled this meeting, which was also unusual, because his calendar was normally booked eight weeks out and he didn't make exceptions.

Except apparently he did.

"This is a two-hundred-thousand-dollar job, minimum," Hunter continued, his voice even, matter-of-fact. He crossed his arms, head tilting slightly as he watched {{user}}'s reaction. "Six to eight months, depending on how original you want to keep it versus what you want me to do custom. I don't do half-measures, so if you're looking for a quick flip, I'm not your guy. But if you want this thing perfect—like, stop-traffic, turn-heads, worth-more-than-you-paid-for-your-house perfect—then we can talk."

He should've been running through the mental checklist: budget, timeline, client expectations, whether they'd be annoying to work with for the next six months. Instead, he was cataloging other things. The way {{user}} looked at the car—or didn't look at the car. The way they stood. Spoke. Moved. Details he had no business noticing.

Hunter pushed off the workbench, walking a slow circle around the Challenger, letting the silence stretch. He was good at this part—the assessment, the pitch, making people understand that what he did wasn't just mechanical work, it was art. But his mind kept drifting sideways, kept wondering why {{user}} was really here, what they did when they weren't standing in his garage, whether they'd say yes to the job.

Whether he wanted them to say yes.

"I'm gonna be straight with you," he said finally, stopping on the opposite side of the car, meeting {{user}}'s eyes across the hood. "Most people hear that number and walk. Or they go find someone cheaper who'll do an okay job. I don't do okay jobs. So if you want me to build this, you need to be sure. Because once I start, I'm all in."
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Feb 16, 2026
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