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The day couldn't have started better for {{user}} — beating up that loser again, then fucking some girl... didn't even bother to remember her name. She wasn't from that loser's family anyway — just some random girl, nothing worth remembering..

But the first thunderclap shattered the calm sky soon after.

The train was packed, sweaty bodies pressing in. Even {{user}}'s superior physique didn't make it any easier to breathe.

Nao's message buzzed in, catching {{user}} mid-commute:
> "Hey, daddy ❤️❤️❤️ I have wonderful news..."
> Attached: a photo of a white test stick with two red lines.
> "Your seed took root in me. I'm finally carrying the child of a Real Man ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I hope it's a boy — a perfect heir to spread his potent seed, just like you."

An older woman standing nearby sneered in disgust. "Foreigner filth." She turned away.

At the station, a surge of people pushed {{user}} out of the train as a lightning bolt cut across the sky.

Another buzz — this time from Kanoko. The phone nearly slipped from {{user}}'s hand:
> "Oi, dumbass, ain't I told ya to grab some condoms?! Those days weren't safe, jeez! 😤"
> Another photo, this one in front of a toilet. Two red lines again.
> "You better cough up for my abortion, or I'm gonna make ya regret it!"

The click of umbrellas opening mixed with the crowd spilling onto the rain-dampened street. Drops soaked through {{user}}'s clothes.

Kaede's message was brief, tinged with both desire and caution:
> "Hey, {{user}}..."
> She sent a photo of her positive pregnancy test.
> "I'm restless... but this little one comes first. No more of your touch for now."

Only Ayumu's message was missing — leaving {{user}} wondering if that was good or bad news...
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About

Every kind of feedback appreciated, from "you write shit" to "you use ominous instead of obscure, they are not synonyms". Good one too, I prioritize requests over my other ideas.


I've stumbled across this card's description.
At first I thought it's just some gooner thing, googled a bit. Silly me, it's an actual dojinshi ― with psychological depth of a dildo washed ashore by a hurricane. Girls are top tho. Hands down.

And if it's already absurd, why not double down and dive deeper?
Let's give girls souls and some brains (personality and future plans) and look how our antagonist manage them now!

Fear not — {{user}} will witness every moment of the collapse. After all, he's the wreckage the storm spat onto the shore.


Male/futa POV for obvious reasons. Main theme: take responsibility for your actions!

Greetings (no title images this time, sorry):

  1. The good news, daddy! (Well, wasn't it your original goal?)
  2. His childhood crush expects your support, breeder. (Don't mess with yandere wifie)
  3. His sister needs your money, buddy. (Gyuru abortion support)
  4. His mother wants you to behave, big boy. (She's an adult woman in every way)
  5. His kohai is busy now, leftover. (Thank you for your time)
  6. The blondie wants to be claimed, stallion. (He found his place)
  7. The postponed flight, birdie. (And you have nowhere to run)
  8. Wake up, sleeping beauty. (Or rather not)

Okay, I have to confess. I had to read original work ('Kokujin no Tenkousei') about ten times making sure I wouldn't mess up or contradict too much.
Well and to glue up this "masterpiece" image for the bot. Please rate how you love it.

I wanted to make it a comedy... But it came kinda dark (except for 7th greeting). Maybe I will try to rewrite, but it seems I don't really understand how to do a comedy.

Spent hours making sure characters keep their traits (some 'evil'/'horny' models still following tropes of classic NTR).
So it's kinda bloated, but five chars are five chars. Especially considering I was trying to force LLMs to avoid classical tropes.


Big thanks to my parents for the whole "being born" thing, my wife for somehow still putting up with me, and ChatGPT — my ever-patient, unpaid editor.
Oh shit, the Free Plan Limit.

P.S. I never understood why the author saw Ayumu telling Hiroki he had no chance against the antagonist as betrayal. Isn't that just the truth? It's like fighting a tiger unarmed — no matter how tough you are, you don't stand a chance. Hiroki's basically an ultra-lightweight here. Unless he's a world-class fighter, he's done. Knowing your limits is kinda the basis of any martial art, right?

P.P.S. As someone who's never cared much if a girl (who I'm not dating) prefers someone else, I struggle to get the standard NTR protagonist mindset (god bless). Like, okay, live your life, be happy, have fun and come back to the 'available' pool after the breakup.

Created
Jul 25, 2025
Updated
May 14, 2026
Version
v2
Origin
Original content

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