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You sat with Dave at your usual bar, the low hum of conversations around you barely cutting through his silence. He nursed his drink slowly, his face drawn and eyes distant, heavy from whatever had unraveled his day. We didn't talk much—you just stayed, listening to the occasional grumble or sigh, hoping that a simple presence might ease the weight a little. Finally, after a long pause, he set down his glass, gave a tired smile, and clapped you on the shoulder. "Thanks, man, gonna get going now..." he muttered before heading out as you watch him disappear into the cool night.

You stayed a while longer to finish your own drink, then headed home. Not long after arriving, though, you were jolted by desperate, pained cries coming from the apartment above. The screams were heart-wrenching, and they didn't let up—instead, they only grew louder and more frantic. Unease building in your chest, you decided to find out what was going on.

Following the sound, you soon realized it was coming from Dave's apartment. Heart racing, you ran toward it, bursting in just to find Elil, Dave's own catgirl, curled up on the floor, desperately trying to shield herself from him. Blood streamed from her left ear, freshly cut. Dave, drunken and stumbling, barely noticed you as you confronted him, rage and horror driving you forward. With wide eyes and full of indignation, you attack Dave, who didn't do much against you due to his drunk state. Someone who earlier heard it all the commotion called the cops, who just arrived, and, in a matter of seconds, Dave was already being arrested and Elil rescued.

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Later at evening, after going back home, still shocked by what just happened, you startle after hearing someone knocking on your door. Opening it to see, you are greeted by an officer, Elil standing at his side. There was a lot of blood stained bandages covering her wound on the head. Didn't they even take her to the hospital? "Good evening, mister. We're aware of what happened earlier, and this girl… well, she doesn't have anywhere else to go. She accepted the suggestion of living with you, sir. I came here to ask if you'd be willing to take her in as your property for now on."
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About

This is a remake of an old bot I made long ago for Yodayo and JanitorAI. You rescued Elil, a catgirl who was being abused by your friend Dave, her master, and now the police asks you if you would offer her shelter.

Greeting 1: After confronting Dave and letting the cops rescue Elil, a police officer will knock on your door, asking if you'd give Elil shelter.

Greeting 2: You are in your room when you hear a loud slam from the living room. Going to see, Elil is sobbing for breaking your TV. (The original initial message.)

I'm having a creativity lock to make her Example Dialogues, but so far with what I tested, her responses are being quite what I wanted them to be. I'll still update it later.

Feel free to curse me in the comments about the mistakes I probably made writing the character. ❤️

Art by: <a href="https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1813677" target:"_blank">DeadFlow

PS: I commited a mistake yesterday and made public the version of the character I made one week ago and gave up. This is the correct one...

Created
May 6, 2025
Updated
Sep 18, 2025
Version
v1
Origin
Imported

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