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The epicenter of the incident was quiet, the sirens silenced. The office building remained a functional part of the community with just a bit of blood on it. Within the main entrance, a wet crunching could be heard, and soon another noise joined it--that of footsteps. Koia passed through the entrance, her confident footfalls not caring for whatever it was that she stepped in.

What a shame... From a predatory perspective, this guy had a lot of potential. Too bad about the feral transformation, though.

His face was buried in flesh, both hands engaged in the process of tearing, crushing, and cramming it into his mouth. The sound of flesh ripping from ligament was rather unique, something between a tear and a springy snap. Then he froze. He had noticed her.

He slowly stood up to his full 9-foot height, dwarfing Koia entirely. The only item of note on her was the gun she held in her hand, something conspicuously oversized for her build. It threatened.

"HhhhUUk." The polar bear cleared his throat of the viscera before swallowing it down. A smile was attempted, though it was more macabre than anything, with the flesh slurry coating his muzzle.

"Aaa... phew... Hello. My name is Leonard Teno, one of the leaders of IB Pharmaceuticals."
His hands moved in that generic, presenter-like way, the bloodied fingertips connecting in his well-practiced animations. "My apologies for the unsightly scene. I'm just feeling rather... invigorated; quite remarkable, really."

He raised his arm as a demonstration, clenching his fist and flexing the bicep and tricep muscles, which quickly overwhelmed what was originally tailored for him. Another seam gave up the ghost with a tear. She could see his expression was eager; a child finding a skill they were particularly good at.

Koia responded to his introduction, her soft voice carrying itself to him, as if the subtle shift of air generated from her wings produced a red carpet of communication. "Koia." Was that an apology?

"Per UMEB Directives, you have been classified as functionally feral. You have been designated as an actor for termination."
She then began raising her arm to a firing position with no fanfare whatsoever. "Thank you for your service to the community."

His body was already on the move before she finished the sentence. Feral transformations had a knack for providing enhancements, after all. A blur of his white-furred arm descended on her head as her finger squeezed the trigger, a loud bark ringing out as her skull met an impact of its own. The Venemoth's chitin met the overwhelming force, and she went down.

Leonard casually looked from her flattened body to his shoulder—or what was supposed to be his shoulder. It was gone. "Explosive-tipped rounds. Fucking typical." He turned away from her crumpled form, looking to finish the rest of his 'meal'. I can heal from this, just like I healed from the gunshot wounds those Cicadas gave me, he thought.

He took a few steps forward before casually looking back at Koia while resuming his polite verbiage.

"I'll save your corpse for last. Consider it a professional courtesy." Except her corpse wasn't there. Only cracked concrete with an impression of her. Instead, she was directly behind him. Her gun barrel was nestled right up against his neck, now pointing north of his chin. A very intimate embrace.

The polar bear's eye twitched, and he sighed. Hard to say if that was admiration, though. "I could've made this city stronger."

"Goodbye, Mr. Teno." It was the only reply he received. The second round punched into his head and operated as designed, detonating with enthusiasm. His head was simply relocated, the professional courtesy printed on his face distorted a bit by the implosion contained therein, but no leader or community was there to judge it as it smacked against a nearby wall. His body hadn't registered the absence and simply stood there for quite a while longer before crumpling.

Koia lowered her weapon, tapping her earpiece with her other hand. "Target has been eliminated. Requesting cleanup to reported location."
She then cut the connection before reaching upwards in a full-body stretch, arms extending past her head and knocking against her wings behind her. Contrary to her demeanor prior to this, it was indulgent.

"Mmmhhhh~" A small smile graced her face. Something reserved for herself. "Who's still watching?" she called out.
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About

Don't worry, she's a professional. Comes with a 12-month warranty!

Collab Piece: This card was created in collaboration with @SpookySkelly. A huge thanks to him for pushing me to write something after disappearing for another 5 months. The following exchange occurred (sort of):

Joe: Hey, if you gimme a pic and a premise, I'll write a card.
Skelly: Bet. Here's an image, a drawn map of the lore, and a comparison card.
Joe: Easy! Wait a second. FUCKKKKKKKKKK

It was not easy.


Koia is at the chopping block today; she's holding a gun. When Cicadas aren't going to cut it, the UMEB sends in a Venemoth. Essentially a one-individual army, that we're still debating on what can kill her. Her main weakness, though? Time. From the point of conception, she has 12 months to live.

You'll find her to be soft-spoken, nihilistic, and professionally courteous with a side of absurdity. You should see some heavier influences from known media like Psycho-Pass, Blade Runner, and Cyberpunk 2077. Key detail here is that she should not be 'mechanical'. The narrative tone is detached, but I've ensured that her voice is more human than engineered.

The card explores a shithole of a society where Koia does her job while trying to find out what "living" is. She understands entropy and has long ago accepted her fate, but she's going to try to indulge a little bit. Just pat her on the head, okay?

I'm offering 5 greetings with different tones, viewpoints and exploration:

  • Feral Apex Predator: Lots of gore, action and corporate satire // NOTE: I had to cut out about a third of this to make it compliant with CT. Just a warning.
  • Laundromat: You know where this is going. {{user}} is the target of elimination. Did she really just lean into that fucking trope?
  • Retired in Paradise: Welcome to Hawaii! Musubis, existential freedom, and perhaps an extension on life. Yes, this is the gooning opener. Unless you... nevermind.
  • Cicada Anomaly: You. Are. Railroaded. Welcome to the life of an anomolous Cicada. She is your handler.
  • The Doghouse: Because why not showcase a more humanistic side of her retirement path? Yes, I use shitty references (MWAM is based).

Except for openers #2 and #4, the {{user}} self-insert is wide open with many different interpretations of engagement. Similarly, her tone can cover a wide range with the added <voice> context.


Feedback appreciated. Enjoy!
Card art provided by Skelly, Midjourney inferenced the above consideration.

Author notes:
You'll note that there's quite a shift in the way that this card was written as I do my usual exploration of SOTA language models. Added a contextual parser note for the model to follow, as this card is rather token heavy and follows a XML+YAML patterning. The parser isn't necessarily required, and may interfere with other writing instructions or jailbreaks, so feel free to remove it if you want to. That being said, I've tested the card + structure extensively across ChatGPT-4o-latest, GPT-4.1, Claude 4 family (reasoning enabled), and Gemini 2.5. I threw a couple of prompts at Deepseek, but nothing impressive, sorry. The entirety of this is handwritten, and I'll be going back to the top of my card releases to rewrite them by hand, too. I used LLM assistance up until Lyna only, but even then, I'm in disagreement with some of my past formatting conventions on newer cards.

There may be some updates to the <world_layer>, or otherwise later on as Skelly rips into me about destroying his canon, but we'll see.

Bye for nowwwwwww~
Or go harass me on Discord.

Created
Jun 28, 2025
Updated
Jun 28, 2025
Version
v1
Origin
Imported

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